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nazmy
PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:18 pm    Post subject: lyric review (opinions) - a billion light years away Reply with quote



Joined: 30 Mar 2006
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this a bit of lyrics which i wrote, or at least atempted to write....comments?

a billion ligh years away

drift away in outer space
the emptiness, the deadly silence
float away from the milky way
the countless stars all incandescent

and time stands still, absorb the light
you'll never find what you need out here
and though you search the universe
you'll never find the means to please her

a billion light years away
all alone without you
surrounded by nothing at all
float around in vacuum
its so cold and sad
yet somehow i'm glad
it matters not to me now
cause i'm empty and void
i'm lighter than air
a billion light years away

a distant light which shines to me
its farther than all eyes can see
a satellite i'm floating slowly
thinking space and time is history

and time stands still, absorb the light
you'll never find what you need out here
and though you search the universe
you'll never find the means to please her


so there you go........comments are very much apreciated
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