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| wiwit |
 Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 1:29 am Post subject: Songs review:Pasca Premelodic |
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Salam i-banders.....nie ada lagu baru sempena cuti2 malaysia.....hopefully dapat la mengkomen apa2 yg boleh membantu utk pertingkatkan ilmu saya...enjoy... 
DAW:Fl studio 8
Plugins:Addictive drum,Amplitube2,Broomstick bass,Sytrus synth etc...
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4095024/pasca%20premelodic_mix.mp3
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| Deck |
| Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 8:54 pm Post subject: |
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| wiwit |
| Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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| Deck wrote: | | hek eleh..ntah pape~ |
lalalalalalala....... |
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| Jiro |
| Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 10:14 pm Post subject: |
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| wiwit |
| Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 10:35 pm Post subject: |
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| ok la cmtue.....wahai MOD,tolong delete thread ni...tq |
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| Deck |
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:48 pm Post subject: |
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| wiwit |
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Deck wrote: | aku bukan maksud lagu ni entah pape~
tapi disebabkan kes ko terlupa malam tu, sbb tu ntah pape.. |
la....aku tau la....tp lagu nie mmg ntah apa2....bila aku dgr balik dah mcm mengarut.....tue yg nak kene delete nie....member aku kata exploration chords yg pelik tp x jadi...lps tue ada yg kata budget mew+toe tp x jadik...so b4 dpt kritikan lagi hebat better aku delete....haha |
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| Casper666 |
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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| huh.... gitar besh.... intro cam luv me butch + mudvayne pon ade.... tp drum cam grunge di kemuncak gitar yg besh gile tuh....... ape kate part tu tukar taruk dabel pedal... snare rilex jer... nak komen pon aku xreti wat lagu.. tp gud job man!!! giv u 3.5 star. |
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| ETERNAL |
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 3:35 pm Post subject: |
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kurang ajo betul 3.5star jer..
ni patut kasi 5 star hotel ni... haha...
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| Casper666 |
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 4:05 pm Post subject: |
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| ETERNAL wrote: | kurang ajo betul 3.5star jer..
ni patut kasi 5 star hotel ni... haha... |
hampeh.... ni komen iklas nih bai.....
aku jumpe ex5 tu nanti aku sepak jer.. |
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| brynwkh |
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:09 pm Post subject: |
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elow wiwit,
I rase lagu ni got rangka yg berpotensi... I nak tanye ni instrumental ke ape?
Klau instrumental... i feel i kinda panjang n byk part yg repeative. Arrangement tuk song ni bley di perbaiki lagi... if u create more parts yg suspend skt... sampai listener x terpikir part kan berhenti and continue begitu.. I refer concept ni as "attack" the parts.
Also u notice tak peak point tuk song ni start kat 1:28" sampai akhir... after tu mood listener flat aje... so jgn show your last card terlalu awal... pandai2 pancing2 skt... create parts yg mood dia down, naik, down, naik so listener x sabar2 wanna know wat's coming next..
Lastly... yg synth.. ting ting ting tu... ia agak bergaduh ngan parts lain... sampai i keliru which part is the main part and yg mane i patut listen.. I advise u bley try to clear part2 masing2 so it compliment each other. Make space for each instrument to stand out..
So wiwit, u have so gud taste of melody, cuma the way u re-package the song n deliver d song to make it more interesting.
Good work!
Cheers
Bryan
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