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neoshida
PostPosted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:50 am    Post subject: Trauna 7 - Syair Anastasia Reply with quote



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Salam... Apa khabar semua...
Saya Miqa dari band Trauna 7, dan kami baru sahaja menghasilkan sebuah lagu baru berjudul Syair Anastasia... Diharap otai-otai kat forum ni boleh tolong review dan komen. Sila beri tunjuk ajar ye... Thanks!

Download : http://www.4shared.com/audio/v9HFS4Nf/Trauna_7_-_Syair_Anastasia.html

Youtube : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5U4rTkq5tGs

MySpace : http://www.myspace.com/trauna7band

Facebook : http://www.facebook.com/traunaseven

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Apa pun aku nak cakap nice dulu...satu hasil kerja yg siap Very Happy

aku dengar pun melalui youtube je..so tak berani comment pasal sound wise sebab aku rasa youtube akan compress video tuh punya quality...

average aku bagi lagi nih ala ala pop kot, atau balada pop Smile kau bole geng dgn ETERNAL Very Happy hehehehe

cuma drum dia terlalu midi sgt bunyi dia..tapi bila dengar banyak kali ..aku rasa maybe kene kot dgn konsep lagu.. sound vocal clear, aku suka..

penyanyi tuh laki ke pompuan? aku dah mula confuse dari awal, atau aku dah mengantuk..

bass pun terlampau sgt kedengaran program dia..

apa pun aku still nak puji nice..sebab aku kategori kan ini sebagai lagu yg siap dan bole tgk ke-serious-an kau nak siap kan lagu nih.. Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 6:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Terima kasih En. Jiro... Pendengaran awak memang teliti...
Vokalis dia lelaki (dengan suara yang sengaja dilenggokkan)
Harap En. Jiro boleh review lagi lagu-lagu saya yang akan datang... =) Razz
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ETERNAL
PostPosted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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ko tgk permainan jiro.. hish hish..

bab mixing aku tak reti komen..
tapi serius dengar midi dan agak dry dan mcm takde panning..

bagi aku (IMHO)...
beat lagu ko mcm tak berapa ngam dengan nyanyian...
contoh:
- chord ada part tukar lambat sket dari vocal...
- sound dari gitar tak cukup nak support vocal..
- bila tukar part, awal2 mcm takde part fill untuk support...

bass plak tak ikut beat drum... jadi agak bosan...

tapi lagu agak boleh tahan.. boleh geng ngan Zham MyMIC...
Vocal pun dah clean...

boleh tahu tak lagu ni buat pakai ape? Fruity Loops ker?
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neoshida
PostPosted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Muzik guna aplikasi Kinetic 2... Vocal guna wave repair and arrangement guna adobe audition...

Thanks for comment Mr. Eternal. Banyak nak kena belajar lagi ni... Embarassed
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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konsep, feel dah nice..
vocal & synth dah ok...

teringat aku band Reflexion...

ko try tgk arrangement lagu dulu sebelum tgk sound balancing/mixing..
balance/sync between instrumenst and vocal...
kalau ngam semua playing/sync betul tight... mix tak best pun still sedap..
keh keh keh..




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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Emm.. Memang bass tak berapa ngam... Lepas ni kena sensitif dengan bass line..... Thanksssssssss!
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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bass ngan kick kna ketat sket,
tentu lg sedap, terutama time chorus
krg teli ngan vocal

tp lagu best ar
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Thanks guys... Ya'll really helpful... Embarassed
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