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neoshida |
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:50 am Post subject: Trauna 7 - Syair Anastasia |
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Jiro |
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:55 am Post subject: |
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Joined: 14 Feb 2007 Posts: 1933 Location: Shah Alam
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neoshida |
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 6:09 pm Post subject: |
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Terima kasih En. Jiro... Pendengaran awak memang teliti...
Vokalis dia lelaki (dengan suara yang sengaja dilenggokkan)
Harap En. Jiro boleh review lagi lagu-lagu saya yang akan datang... =) _________________ I'm not a songwriter, I just wrote song. M.Nasir is.
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ETERNAL |
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:06 pm Post subject: |
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Joined: 01 Aug 2005 Posts: 3382 Location: Dreamland
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ko tgk permainan jiro.. hish hish..
bab mixing aku tak reti komen..
tapi serius dengar midi dan agak dry dan mcm takde panning..
bagi aku (IMHO)...
beat lagu ko mcm tak berapa ngam dengan nyanyian...
contoh:
- chord ada part tukar lambat sket dari vocal...
- sound dari gitar tak cukup nak support vocal..
- bila tukar part, awal2 mcm takde part fill untuk support...
bass plak tak ikut beat drum... jadi agak bosan...
tapi lagu agak boleh tahan.. boleh geng ngan Zham MyMIC...
Vocal pun dah clean...
boleh tahu tak lagu ni buat pakai ape? Fruity Loops ker? _________________ KreativWerks MediaSolutions|Soundcloud | YouTube | Facebook |
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neoshida |
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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Joined: 02 Jun 2009 Posts: 40 Location: KL
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Muzik guna aplikasi Kinetic 2... Vocal guna wave repair and arrangement guna adobe audition...
Thanks for comment Mr. Eternal. Banyak nak kena belajar lagi ni... _________________ I'm not a songwriter, I just wrote song. M.Nasir is.
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:50 pm Post subject: |
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Mod Squad
Joined: 01 Aug 2005 Posts: 3382 Location: Dreamland
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konsep, feel dah nice..
vocal & synth dah ok...
teringat aku band Reflexion...
ko try tgk arrangement lagu dulu sebelum tgk sound balancing/mixing..
balance/sync between instrumenst and vocal...
kalau ngam semua playing/sync betul tight... mix tak best pun still sedap..
keh keh keh..
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neoshida |
Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:16 am Post subject: |
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Emm.. Memang bass tak berapa ngam... Lepas ni kena sensitif dengan bass line..... Thanksssssssss! _________________ I'm not a songwriter, I just wrote song. M.Nasir is.
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boyroy |
Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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Joined: 28 Jun 2008 Posts: 1429 Location: Shah Alam
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bass ngan kick kna ketat sket,
tentu lg sedap, terutama time chorus
krg teli ngan vocal
tp lagu best ar _________________ KRAMER MIJ 87~89
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neoshida |
Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks guys... Ya'll really helpful... _________________ I'm not a songwriter, I just wrote song. M.Nasir is.
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