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neoshida
PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:25 am    Post subject: Trauna 7 - Opus Untukmu Reply with quote



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Sebuah lagu yang tak lari konsep dengan lagu sebelum ni (syair anastasia) iaitu Symphonic Pop... Minta tolong otai-otai nilaikan lagu ni.... Thanks!

Youtube : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gs6ifIvIt3c

Download : http://www.4shared.com/account/audio/6bIWfG77/Trauna_7_-_Opus_Untukmu.html

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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hurmm.. i think yg sebelum nih lagi better..

lagu nih hambar sgt..

nyanyian tak kene, dari segi vocal dan melodi line.

terlampau hambar..

sound sgt sgt midi..dan sgt sgt dry

dan mix dia terlampau nyata macam lagu tak siap dan tak blend..

sorry..saya lagi suka lagi sebelum nih..

kalau nak cerita kelemahan yg lain, sgt byk dan too detail..saya dah mengantuk nih huhuhu ada masa esok siang saya cuba bagi dgn suggestion yg mana should di titik beratkan dan correction yg kene ambil kira Very Happy

apa pun..this is My Humble Opinion Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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ye la bro..
kenapa tak record je instrument tu?
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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aku suker lagu ni,
aku leh imagine tgk movie atau best kalo buat video clip
aku suker dgr lagu ni
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ye bro...
komersial abes...
nak saiiinnn... heheh
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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naper nyanyi dari idung ne... hahaaha
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ultraman_cosmo wrote:
naper nyanyi dari idung ne... hahaaha


br ader karaktor hahahaaha
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idung dia ada install SH-13


hhahaha gurau je tau bro...jgn complain kat scentofcarnage lak Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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kalo ajak marka duk sblh tgk korg perform
duk blkg2 samar lmpu hall cnfrm lentok kepala kt bahu,
hahahaha
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Thanks for all the comment! Love it!

Actually lagu Opus Untukmu ni key dia sangat tinggi, stail Once Dewa 19 / Faizal Tahir.
Tapi saya 'lowered'kan key dia supaya saya boleh nyanyi sendiri... (turun 5 key) Itulah penyebab mengapa lagu jadi sedikit sumbang / hambar dan 'feel' asal banyak lari...
Obviously, saya bukan penyanyi yang baik, haha...

Thanks!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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You guys might want to check out my other song titled "Cintakan Jadi Penawar". It is NOT a rock song and the guitar section has been taken out completely. So, i'm not put it as a new topic here. If you guy have an extra time for some ballad side of Trauna 7, here's the Youtube link : -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2S5yIzI4pY

Enjoy!
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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sorry ar bro neo
bkn aku nak up ko jack lebey2 ar
title cinta kan jd penawar ni

aku no comment ar
cuma aku nk bg tau
time aku bk lagu ni
Wife aku tanya detail plak, lagu saper ni, duk mana, da ader album ker
itu la, ini la, bla bla bla bla,

aku rasa suara bro ni memang x sdp, tp sgt komersial
try la cr peluang expose, buat btl2, x yah cr vocal lain,

IMHO

cnth,
aku x suka sorg tu raja sms,
tp try ar tny, siap yg x knl dia,
ank aku 5 thn pn tau nama dia,
bro mst bley agak saper tu kn....
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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ehem2.. bro..
lirik ade? Laughing
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ETERNAL wrote:
ehem2.. bro..
lirik ade? Laughing


Lagu mana satu Encik ETERNAL?

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boyroy wrote:
sorry ar bro neo
bkn aku nak up ko jack lebey2 ar
title cinta kan jd penawar ni

aku no comment ar
cuma aku nk bg tau
time aku bk lagu ni
Wife aku tanya detail plak, lagu saper ni, duk mana, da ader album ker
itu la, ini la, bla bla bla bla,

aku rasa suara bro ni memang x sdp, tp sgt komersial
try la cr peluang expose, buat btl2, x yah cr vocal lain,

IMHO

cnth,
aku x suka sorg tu raja sms,
tp try ar tny, siap yg x knl dia,
ank aku 5 thn pn tau nama dia,
bro mst bley agak saper tu kn....



Thanks!

Idea asal lagu Cintakan Jadi Penawar ni ialah DUET... Apakan daya, dapat buat setakat ini aje... Alangkah bestnyer kalau Syafinaz sudi duet dengan saya... Laughing Laughing Laughing

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