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| Spasmenos |
 Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:25 pm Post subject: Machines and Me |
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been long time now.. so heres a new track
title : Machines and me
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| HuntressM00n |
| Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 3:54 pm Post subject: |
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HMmm need to point out a grammatical error here.
It's Machine and I
No hard feelings yeah
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| liquidjive |
| Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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it's good!
love the mood of this song. Hard, straight to the face industrial metal. It fits nicely as a soundtrack to any futuristic movie.
though i think the kick drums are too boomy, and may the guitar is too thin.
but overall, the it is a great idea.
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| tengga |
| Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 7:30 pm Post subject: Sorry, beg to differ Miss! |
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HMmm need to point out a grammatical error here.
It's Machine and I
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Pardon me Miss, but 'Machines and me' is perfectly acceptable in a contemporary context (English as she is spoke -- 'n' ditched intentionally -- now!).
As for the tune, I agree with liquidjive. It needs more bottom end... The bass could be brought up a bit.
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| Jeff |
| Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 7:54 pm Post subject: |
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the musicianships pretty good as always, but you really need to put vocals in your songs to drive it forward. Its severly lacking in that department and u really should start putting lyrics to those great tunes you keep coming up with, else you might have ppl pegging your songs as 'half-baked'..which might mean that it wont be taken seriously. Still, its good stuff..keep going!
i dont see anything wrong with Machines and Me though, and sounds just fine the way it is. |
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| HuntressM00n |
| Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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=p
dun merajuk la
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| Spasmenos |
| Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:25 am Post subject: |
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liquidjive hey man thx for the review.. and yeap my kick drums suck lol.. and in this track i cant believe i forgot to add bass it in.. lol.. but hey.. thx for ur review man.. much respect!
tengga hahaha.. awesome man.. thx for the review .. yeap will do with the bass
Jeff... omg jeff... dont be angry mate.. i was thinking of adding them vocals.. but i've been busy with assignments lately man... and another thing.. im still not good with vocals man.. but anyway.. yala.. will add vocals soon.. thx jeff kazen ku ahhaha!
Huntressmoon... hehe sol good mate |
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| 7thlovechild |
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| Jeff |
| Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 1:47 pm Post subject: |
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| marah la bai ni! ..hahaha..nada la, ma tingu ko improve ba. its all good son! |
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