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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 9:42 am    Post subject: Undefined - 2008 POP SONGS, remixing and remastered. Reply with quote



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Hi, akhirnye, aku kembali menjenguk home recording club. hehehhe, pasal teruja ngan korang yang rajin rekod lagu. harap korang dpt review okay.


Recording Software : Sonic Foundary Acid Pro 3.0
Drum : Rythm Rascal V2.2
Bass : present bass sound from RP150
Fernandez lefty
Digitech RP150
HP Presario V3000

using unknown cheap band pc microphone for vocal line.
using creative earphone and laptop built in speakers as mixing monitor.


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lagu ni agak raw, mixing pn simple je, jugak vocal line yang tak berapa serius. and tak mastering pn, jadi volume korang kena kuat sikit ye ehehehhe..

try review dari segi composition, drum loop sound dan others ...


Thank you...
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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dey.. kasi bikin boleh donwload la wei... Razz
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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ok done, janji review okay Smile

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kasik gua dengar 2-3 hari sebelum gua review ok.. Twisted Evil
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aku dah dgr..agak menarik konsep ni..not typical indie rock ke or something

maybe some key arrangement? and some part cam too heavy too soon
u need to slowly ease the song to the heaviness part i think

think bohemian rhapsody or ending part for stairway to heaven

hehe my two cents
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tima kasih omar,

thanks for the tips too .. mixing okay x?
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good job undefined...lagu cinta tu...vokal 1 lapis jer ker?composition wise...brilliant...at 2.39 mood lagu suddently change...pastu masuk slow part balik...great...
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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hi kozam,

tima kasih. yg tu draft vocal je. balancing camne okay ke? skali dengar part drum loop tu ada human x?


ok, ni dia 2nd revision untuk semua lagu, plus new arrangement for 'i am lonely sheep'

lagu dari hati
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/play.php?band_id=20&song_id=9487&mode=song_hifi

cinta pertama
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/play.php?band_id=20&song_id=9486&mode=song_hifi

i'm a lonely sheep 2008
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/play.php?band_id=20&song_id=9489&mode=song_hifi




harap korang suma buleh dengar dan review.. Smile
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lagu ni okay sebenarnya... tapi ade a few things yg buat dia jd kurang menarik... entah aku pon tak tau apa dia...

tapi yang pasti, kalau real vocalist yg nyanyi semula maybe jadi lagi sedap kot... sbb vocal kurang feel.. maybe ko nyanyi utk guide je kot?

and clean guitar sound tu mcm ada something tak kena la... strings out of tune ke? balancing ke? playing teknik ke? aku tak tau...

bass okay, sedap... drum tu ada certain part toms bunyi mcm midi skit... the rest okay la not bad... cuma 2 benda tu je la kot, vocals n clean guitars... composition menarik, melody vocals pon not bad...

kalu buat betul2 lagu ni, sedap sebenarnya... sbb lagu dia quite catchy, bleh lekat dlm kepala... tgh2 drive boleh terngiang2 lak lagu ni dlm kepala aku.. ches! hahahah
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Idea bagus. Melodi nyanyian sedap, tapi vocal kena buat balik. Aku tak dengar abis lagi. Sangkut2, connection opis teruk giler. Nanti balik rumah aku dengar balik.
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lagu ni okay sebenarnya... tapi ade a few things yg buat dia jd kurang menarik... entah aku pon tak tau apa dia...

tapi yang pasti, kalau real vocalist yg nyanyi semula maybe jadi lagi sedap kot... sbb vocal kurang feel.. maybe ko nyanyi utk guide je kot?

and clean guitar sound tu mcm ada something tak kena la... strings out of tune ke? balancing ke? playing teknik ke? aku tak tau...

bass okay, sedap... drum tu ada certain part toms bunyi mcm midi skit... the rest okay la not bad... cuma 2 benda tu je la kot, vocals n clean guitars... composition menarik, melody vocals pon not bad...

kalu buat betul2 lagu ni, sedap sebenarnya... sbb lagu dia quite catchy, bleh lekat dlm kepala... tgh2 drive boleh terngiang2 lak lagu ni dlm kepala aku.. ches! hahahah


tima kasih zid, kalu psl vocal tu, yg 2 draft, lagipn x berani jerit betul2 sat gi anak aku jaga lak hehehe.. anyway aku baru je replace dgn 2nd revision ni cuba ko check pulak.

clean sound mgkin aku silap pilih effect kot, psl tu rasa lain, xpe nanti aku try effect yg sesuai. dah terngiang2 tu elok ko hafal lagu tu mane tau nanti aku turun sana buleh jam skali hahahah...

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Idea bagus. Melodi nyanyian sedap, tapi vocal kena buat balik. Aku tak dengar abis lagi. Sangkut2, connection opis teruk giler. Nanti balik rumah aku dengar balik.


thanks, ni aku kasi link download, senang sikit ko nak dengar suma Smile

cinta pertama
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/download.php?band_id=20&song_id=9486&mode=song_hifi

lagu dari hati
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/download.php?band_id=20&song_id=9487&mode=song_hifi

i'm a lonely sheep 2008
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/download.php?band_id=20&song_id=9489&mode=song_hifi
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thx for the revewing my song....skng tngh dngr ...agk menarik gak...baru 1 lagu ..len tngh dl.... Cool
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Asylum wrote:
thx for the revewing my song....skng tngh dngr ...agk menarik gak...baru 1 lagu ..len tngh dl.... Cool


ok thanks asylum, take ur time dengar banyak2 kali then baru review okay Smile



ada lagu baru, tunggu
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Aik bro sejak bila main lagu pop bro?? Ahahaha it's all good Wink Meh aku review plak... Syok gak dengar lagu pop hang ni... dengar Metal je hari2 pun pening gak...Razz

Sounds really good for something that has been mixed using a pair of earphones. Aku pun takleh dapat mix macam ni punya balanced kalau pakai earphones.. I think you have exceeded yourself young padawan..huhuhu

Anyway I would like to agree with Deadzid ...macam guitar ko tu out of tune lah.....Hmnnn ?? I noticed also that your vocals were slightly flat throughout the sound. But as far as the quality of the recorded vocals... its really good considering the microphone you used kan??

Anyway sometimes we have to make do with what we have right??

Good job overall...

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 11:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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thanks, actually these pop songs ni suma inspired dgn gelombang indie band skrg ni hehehhe, tapi bukan tipikal pop la macam omar cakap Smile

both earphones dan laptop speaker help a lot untuk balancing purpose. pasal tune tu aku agree, lagi pn the flanger setting agak over sometimes buleh rasa out of tune.

for vocal, aku akan cuba improve lagi.. thanks a lot Smile
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