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| pali |
 Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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nice tune guys!! keep up the good work!!!
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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undefined, due to not everyone has broadband connection, can u put low-bitrate version of your songs? just use the given tool dgn single click jer. Aku pakai dial-up jer (maklumlah orang miskin..) tai nak dengar jugak.
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| undefined |
| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:10 am Post subject: |
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| undefined |
| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:18 am Post subject: |
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 11:49 am Post subject: |
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Hi undefined,
aku pun amateur je. Tak sampai tahap pro tapi aku cuba untuk bagi sikit komen..
Dari segi idea lagu dan melodi(Predicate Not Defined) mmg patut dipuji sebab nampak percubaan nak buat kelainan. Kejap heavy kejap mcm 60s pun ada. Confuse aku..hehe tp thats good!. Creative! Cuma Beri penekanan pada basic thing mcm tempo dan pitch. Aku harap band ni dapat matangkan lagi lagu tu terutama dari segi riff dan drum arrangement dan juga sound!. Try to make something different and boost up your creativity ! Kalau boleh rekod la lagu ni byk kali with diferent style.
I found that Vocal ada masalah basic iaitu pitching. Pada aku bab pitching ni adalah gifted. Sometimes tak payah belajar vocal pun boleh tau kat mana pitching lari. Cuma apa yang menariknya bagi aku, waktu vocal cuba tarik suara tinggi tapi tak sampai. Ini boleh jadi trademark band ni..tapi dengan syarat low pitch mesti diambil berat.
Ini cuma pendapat aku je dan jgn go down dgn pendapat orang ok.
good work and try to be better all the time!
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| undefined |
| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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hi izuanhafez,
tima kasih sebab memberi komen. saya mewakili pihak kugiran berbesar hati atas cadangan2 bernas anda. actually we just try to make some experiment tentang structure lagu and also the add- hoc progression interchange (konon2 la heheh..) . but aku still in learning process how to make a good songs and a good riff.
pasal vocal tu, it's true. aku admit. nak kata tu trademark aku pun tak tau... normally masa jam okay je, tapi masa record fail pulak.. tapi it's okay.. at least aku dapat pengajaran kalau record mesti betul2.. takleh main2 bab2 vocal ni ye tak?
sekali lagi thanks atas pendapat ngko..
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| Jeff |
| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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| not bad guys, i like Thank You. Youve got a nice solid bassline going there, an theres the nice break in the middle. My opinion would be to focus it more on guitar work then rather than let the vocals carry on...play on your strengths i would recommend. Some leveling problems where simple compression would of worked good, but nothing major. Keep it up, looking forward to your next stuff. |
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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amik contoh seperti cranberries. Kalau dulu kita nyanyi mcm tu orang kata macam keldai tp cranberries jadikan keldai tu trademark dia. Pada aku pitching tak semestinya selalu kena tepat.. ko nak sumbang mambangkan boleh cuma mesti kena dengan tempat dan feel yang tertentu. Yang penting express your feeling.. thanks
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| undefined |
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