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| totziens |
| Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2005 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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I listened to the song 4-5 times before commenting.
Music wise it's something different from what I have heard from your band in the past. Consider this as a praise - I always admire bands which are not afraid to explore.
The melody is quite good but I think there's a room for improvement...I don't know how you're going to do it though especially the melody of the vocal. The beginning seems ok but at around 1.43mins the vocal seems to go flat and out. As you mentioned the pitching part is not perfect as this is a draft but I'm not really referring to the pitching...it's the melody in the vocal. It's quite difficult for me to put in words. I could hear this kind of problem in another of your older songs too (the melody..everything was perfect but suddenly the melody changed and the vocal became flat)..For the rest of your heavier songs, it may not be so obvious to listener if they don't listen carefully.
But overall it's a nice job and really a good try.
Sorry for criticising but I really hope to see the best of you guys as a friend. Hmm...have I turned into a fussy grumpy old man now...??? |
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waaa... nice tune... enjoy... aku rase kate totzien btul gak.... melody voc ko dah cantek kalu tp tak cukup cantek... aku pom tak reti nak buat melody yg cantik... tp aku suka care ko tukar melody dari verse ke chorus.... dier macam petukaran yg drastik... haha  good stuf bro... enjoy gak dengar lagu nih....
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wahhh gitar sound best, yg aku suka skali sound bass...boleh buat aku gelek tu...wah....teruskan usaha...syok ni, mcm jrock pun dah ade dah ni ..hehe
tapi nyanyi dgn penuh semangat skit.... |
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| Erylasia |
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| The sound quality sounds "tenggelam" too but I don't know whether this is due to my lousy sound card and lousy earphone/speakers. Someone else should be able to give a proper comment. That's why I didn't mention this earlier. |
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| Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 6:37 pm Post subject: |
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| undefined wrote: | ye tima kasih en eynkarr, jrock? ape tu?
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j rock tu cam jpop la....lagu2 japan rock....cam l ar en ciel ke.....x japan...luna sea.....ada sesekali masuk irama camtu yg best tu |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 11:36 am Post subject: |
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| undefined wrote: | | totziens wrote: | | The sound quality sounds "tenggelam" too but I don't know whether this is due to my lousy sound card and lousy earphone/speakers. Someone else should be able to give a proper comment. That's why I didn't mention this earlier. |
so far the sound is level to me, both 3 PCs in my office give at least same volume / standard volume and bright sound expect headphone with more bass. u can try listen from different speaker to validate...
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Don't worry too much about this if nobody else comment about it. As I said, it could be my speaker/haedphone/sound card issue.
Rock on, dude! |
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