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| MiN |
 Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 5:55 pm Post subject: Rival |
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 7:46 pm Post subject: |
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Min.. kalau boleh cepat ko completekan.. Dari sudut previous style ko, lagu ni ada improvement dari segi pembawakan mood dan feel. Boleh rasa level by level ko bawak sampai part climax yg hujung tu.. good!
suggestion aku, lagi bagus kalau semesa menuju klimax tu ko byk main melodi yg bukan scale running semata2 but more to singging melody. Ini personal opinion aku jer.
dari segi recording, better dari sebelum ni cuma kat speaker aku ni bunyi pedal drum mcm terlebih kuat. (ye la aku pakai subwoofer agaknya).
kalau boleh, cepat la ko habiskan lagu ni hehhe..
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| Bode |
| Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 1:59 am Post subject: |
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Vibrato and bending has improved helluva lot! Cool!(tak sia sia aku dok selalu marah kau!  )
I like the laid back parts in the beginning....slowly establishing the melody...in some pentatonic parts you actually sound a bit like Keedal(you may be dissappointed that I said that, but to me that's a cool thing! )
If the song is longer, you can put the technical tapping/picking workouts towards the end of the song, while still making the guitar 'sing' during the earlier phases. Careful with the tapping licks when doing multiple tracking....make sure all the parts timekeeping are spot on...or else it can sound 'messy' at places.
From 1:50 onwards...the song has that 'Michael Angelo' vibe...which is cool if that's what you're aiming for 
It's tempting to award full marks for your alternate picking...clean and very well articulated! |
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| MiN |
| Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 7:28 am Post subject: |
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| IZZI wrote: | Min.. kalau boleh cepat ko completekan.. Dari sudut previous style ko, lagu ni ada improvement dari segi pembawakan mood dan feel. Boleh rasa level by level ko bawak sampai part climax yg hujung tu.. good!
suggestion aku, lagi bagus kalau semesa menuju klimax tu ko byk main melodi yg bukan scale running semata2 but more to singging melody. Ini personal opinion aku jer.
dari segi recording, better dari sebelum ni cuma kat speaker aku ni bunyi pedal drum mcm terlebih kuat. (ye la aku pakai subwoofer agaknya).
kalau boleh, cepat la ko habiskan lagu ni hehhe.. |
thx wan,
aku try nanti bikin melodic tapi kalau ader idea la....aku try sequence yg bukan scale running....
kalau recording lak aku tak tau la ader improve ker tak sebab aku memang tak reti guna software....aku guna yg simple jer tu pasal recording aku tak berapa bagus....kwkewkekwkewek |
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| MiN |
| Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 7:34 am Post subject: |
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| Bode wrote: | Vibrato and bending has improved helluva lot! Cool!(tak sia sia aku dok selalu marah kau! )
I like the laid back parts in the beginning....slowly establishing the melody...in some pentatonic parts you actually sound a bit like Keedal(you may be dissappointed that I said that, but to me that's a cool thing! )
If the song is longer, you can put the technical tapping/picking workouts towards the end of the song, while still making the guitar 'sing' during the earlier phases. Careful with the tapping licks when doing multiple tracking....make sure all the parts timekeeping are spot on...or else it can sound 'messy' at places.
From 1:50 onwards...the song has that 'Michael Angelo' vibe...which is cool if that's what you're aiming for
It's tempting to award full marks for your alternate picking...clean and very well articulated! |
thx bro Bode,
since bro ngan wan pun nak the shredding part at the end of the song....i will try to come up with a new version nanti....
errmmm.....kena la aku come up with melodic phrases nampaknya kwkewkekwek....
memang tapping licks tu bertabur....aku tak ikut tempo langsung....kwkewkek
michael angelo vibe ker??....kwekwkekwekk.....tak perasan lak aku bila main licks tu sebab aku ader curi2 sikit sequence Paul Gilbert....kwkewkekwek.....
picking aku nak dekat full marks ker bro??.....yer ker??....wah mcm overrated lak aku....kwekwkekwekwe......kena praktis lagi la
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 2:24 pm Post subject: |
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picking ko mmg superb la.. clean habis.. apa rahsianya? aku dah cuba sedaya upaya nak clean kan picking bila tgh speeding, tp still tak byk peningkatan jugak..
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| Erylasia |
| Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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| undefined |
| Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 10:17 am Post subject: |
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| MiN |
| Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 10:53 am Post subject: |
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| IZZI wrote: | | picking ko mmg superb la.. clean habis.. apa rahsianya? aku dah cuba sedaya upaya nak clean kan picking bila tgh speeding, tp still tak byk peningkatan jugak.. |
rahsianya??
errrmmm....praktis triplets kot? once your fretting hand can play fast triplets then your right hand should practice the picking.... |
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| MiN |
| Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 10:55 am Post subject: |
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| undefined wrote: | hi min,
sorry lambat review... err amik masa sikit aa kena download hehehe..
aku dah dengar satu round... intro memang best.. dia punye feel macam 80s rock punye gitar solo aaa... mungkin dia punye riff tu banyak mempengaruhi kot..
sound gitar best.. berlemak...
credit dekat clean gitar punye rythim aa sedap...
aku tak reti solo2 macam ni... cuma buleh bagi komen pasal feel dalam melodi lagu je la... harap ko puas ati...
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hi bro.....
betul riff tu byk mempengaruhi....thx alot bro....feel tu aku hentam jer la....tak realise lak ader org suka....kwkewkekwkek....
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| stan |
| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 9:58 pm Post subject: ^_^ V |
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| caya arrr... tajuknya dah kena ngan melodi.... teruja sgt aku dgr... siap pakai efek... aku baru so segan sikit nak cadang apa yg perlu tambah... tapikan kalau aku tgk tajuk dier... mesti ada klimaks skit.... kalau boleh color tone tu dah berubah dah. aku just cadangkan je... peace! ^_^ V |
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| Kozam |
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