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| Kozam |
 Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 8:08 am Post subject: Kozam- Rough,Neo-Classical tunes wannabe-Please review |
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| omarjamaludin |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 8:38 am Post subject: |
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wah best ni...boleh jadi hebat kasi fine tune with better recording (drum samples, strings etc)..byk sgt guitarist cun kat i-bands hehe rasa malu pulak aku tak reti main camni..hehe..
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| Kozam |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 8:46 am Post subject: |
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| omarjamaludin |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 8:59 am Post subject: |
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| Kozam wrote: | | Thanx Omar, bab recording tu,mmg aku pun tak pueh hati, nak upgrade PC tak terbuat-buat lg.Aku guna apa yang ada jer...Nko punya songs and play pun very good gak, layan... |
haha come on man...aku punya lagu2 tu pun patut aku delete je..terlalu amateurish sgt....tapi itu memori rekod lagu masa sangap di US so aku biarkan je hehe..
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| Kozam |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 1:33 pm Post subject: |
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No...Omar ..dont delete it...  i think ur touch got expression, aku suka lagu blues ko |
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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good playing! idea bagus tapi perlu diimprovekan lagi..
ada 2 cadangan berkaitan sound:
1. Kalau boleh repair sikit mixing samada slowkan sikit rythm atau kekalkan rythm dan kuatkan drum dgn lead solo. Guna mixer pada software tu tapi pastikan jgn sampai clipping.
2. Cari jln mcmana nak kurangkan bunyi pasir pada guitar track. Ko guna metal zone direct ker ni kozam? kalau ko guna direct, kena cut high frequency 12k ke atas.. kalau bunyi pasir ada lagi cuba cut frequency 11k ke atas..
overall good and keepidap bro!
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| MiN |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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hi Kozam,
aku bab recording pun aku tak reti so aku tak nak komen tentang recording tapi aku boleh komen tentang teknik permainan ko.
aku rasa 3 strings arpeggio tu perlu dynamics lagi. aku dgr macam ko takut2 jer nak main arpeggio tu....
kalau ko ader dynamics dan confident tentu lebih cool bunyi arpeggio tu....tapi kalau ko praktis jer lagu ni sebelum ko record tentu lebih cun....arpeggio tu kasi power sikit sebab tu 3 string arpeggio jer.
cuba try arpeggio tu at a higher tempo....higher tempo than the one ko record. main sampai clean jgn guna distortion. pastu ko record lagi....tentu byk improvement.
tentang picking pulak nanti ler aku komen....takut pulak ko marah aku komen benda2 camni....
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:19 pm Post subject: |
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wah tip baru ni min.. boleh la aku try..
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| Bode |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 11:43 pm Post subject: |
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On top of everything yg dah di cadangkan(semua cadangan2 bagus)...seperti biasa, aku syorkan perfectkan pitching dan vibrato dulu. Kalau main satu note kita tak boleh control, main seribu pun tak ada maknanya 
All in all...lagu ni a good starting effort, Kozam...teruskan!
Upload la lagi lagu2 |
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| ultraman_cosmo |
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Woiii, kozam. crying machine punya gang ne.
Alamat dah serdang tu, biler nak ajak aku gi jam.... heheheheh... ada geng neo clasic ne...
Yea, aku sangat stuju dengan bode. Nak control note sebijik pun penting giler. Biasanya utk feel blues senang nak improve kan bebenda cam ne. masa main blues rasanya kita cuba guna less note maybe 1 or 2 or 3 jer tapi try to control dia for macam macam style and mood.
to sand.
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| Kozam |
| Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 2:24 pm Post subject: |
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Thanx all....
wah first time Doc komen lagum aku..best best...sori lambat reply,server ofis down...
firstly,
1) kelemahan sound recording, aku akan record balik with better PC, skang aku pakai zoom direct to PC.
2) Arpegios terabur, aku baru tgh practis nak smoothering 4 string arpegios. next time i'll do this with higher tempo
3) Pitching and vibrato, aku rasa susah sgt bila nak vibrato masa dlm solo yang laju...I know i need to improve this one.ANY TIPs?
Actually aku play this one one shot jer, tu yang terabur skit..thanx for the comments..
MIN ..please comment on the picking i would like to improve that one |
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| MiN |
| Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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| Kozam wrote: | Thanx all....
wah first time Doc komen lagum aku..best best...sori lambat reply,server ofis down...
firstly,
1) kelemahan sound recording, aku akan record balik with better PC, skang aku pakai zoom direct to PC.
2) Arpegios terabur, aku baru tgh practis nak smoothering 4 string arpegios. next time i'll do this with higher tempo
3) Pitching and vibrato, aku rasa susah sgt bila nak vibrato masa dlm solo yang laju...I know i need to improve this one.ANY TIPs?
Actually aku play this one one shot jer, tu yang terabur skit..thanx for the comments..
MIN ..please comment on the picking i would like to improve that one |
vibrato kalau nak main laju memang tak leh la....part die slow sikit tu yg ko kasi vibrato tuh....
kalau tentang picking aku suggest ko masuk ask our guitar doc section dan ko klik topik guitar challenge 1. kat situ aku ader mainkan paul gilbert punya licks dari slow sampai laju....ko praktis licks tu dan rakam balik kasi aku dgr ko nyer tempo paling laju....ok.... |
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| Kozam |
| Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 1:20 pm Post subject: |
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| Aku ader dengar ko punya challenge tu before ni and aku ader tryy practice.that licks really make my hand cramp.the hardest part are to syncronize left and right hand.. |
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 2:38 pm Post subject: |
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to syncronize left and right hand, kena start dgn tempo yg paling ko perfect bila main. Dont go further until ko betul2 perfect dgn tempo tu then baru la lajukan sikit tempo tu. Setiap tempo tu mungkin makan masa few days utk biasakan dan clean.. aku buat macam ni.. dan ada effect yg sangat besar lepas sebulan buat.. tp skrg still belum dpt laju lagi.. bila dah biasa dgn sesuatu tempo, baru la main masa recording jadi lebih baik..
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| Kozam |
| Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 3:55 pm Post subject: |
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| yes tempo is one thing, masalah aku bila altenate picking, let say triplet per string alternate picking ,suddently ada note shifment on the same string which i have to move hand to reach 4th note,itu yang menjadikan aku loss count alternate, from down-up-down-up-down-up, dia jadi down-up-down -up-down-down.pastu terus terabur, hahah |
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, please listen and comments.
