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 Posted: Tue May 11, 2004 5:36 pm Post subject: 2nd round song review (THANK YOU) |
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| Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 7:36 pm Post subject: |
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| It's a great song. Nice riff, chord progression, variations of rhythms and time signatures, moods and vocal melody. There is good chemistry between the different musicians here, though the 'tightness' can be improved even further. Drums did falter a bit but these are very minimal. The guitar sound is okay, though I wished the guitarist used the bridge pickup for the rhythm guitar parts (but this is totally according to taste...there is no right or wrong here). The solo is interesting and adds colour nicely to the song. The biggest weakness is perhaps the vocalist's inability to be comfortable when singing in the higher vocal range, and this is somewhat frustrating since all the other aspects of the song and its performance were pretty cool. The overall quality of the demo is pretty good as well...especially the drum sounds. |
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| Posted: Fri May 14, 2004 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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hi bode,
it's an honour to me to get a review from the best musician i ever known hehehe...
i admit that the vocal pitch is very poor compare to the musical arrangement. i promise to myself to concentrate more on this as what my friend said "that's not point having a very very good musical arrangement in a song while the vocal is very bad".
other weakness maybe the tightness of our playing as a band, perhaps we should really get surious into metronome after this. having a great idea in composing music is a proud for us and trully it's kind a nervous a bit to show it to people and waiting for their feedback 
anyway... thanks again bode.
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| Posted: Fri May 14, 2004 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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Actually the vocal tu not bad...just masa higher registers jer dia falter. Pasal tightness tu , its the same for every band...just jam together as much as possible whenever you have the chance  |
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