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STONE |
Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:25 pm Post subject: review 3 lagu aku.. |
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STONE |
Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:32 pm Post subject: BLACK METAL totally guna fruity loops 6 |
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undefined |
Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 1:14 pm Post subject: |
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Joined: 08 Dec 2003 Posts: 1301 Location: gelogor, penang, malaysia
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alo en stone,
ape citer? banyak peningkatan skrg ye.. buleh buat lagu2 banyak2 ni hehehhe..
lagu 1st:
muzik ok, riffing tipikal, sound biasa je la. music arrangement normal la. ko banyak explore kat drumming tu kan? hehehe.. nanti biler dah ok ko study kat cara mixing dan carik sound lagi sedap ok. lagu ni kat tengah tu agak best!
lagu 2nd:
intro best gak. style2 maiden gitu.. kali ni sound agak balance, drumming pun sedap. tapi kureng biler masuk twin pedal dia jadi tenggelam suma sound lain. solo cam biasa, buleh improve ... yang lain ok, cam biasa kat tengah mesti catchy... lagu ni ada potensi tau...
lagu 3rd:
best gak, feel sama cam lagu 1st dan 2nd. cuma kalu buleh sound gitar rthym tu touch up sikit kasi mid sikit biar jelas strumming tu dengar. dan lagu ni x balance biler masuk clean, lagi sound dia kureng... sorry la ye, harap ko ok,
harap buleh dengar lagu2 ni complete ngan vocal baru lebih impak hehehhehe..
all the best bro... _________________ http://www.facebook.com/pages/PREDICATE-NOT-DEFINED/78606712588
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STONE |
Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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undefined wrote: | alo en stone,
ape citer? banyak peningkatan skrg ye.. buleh buat lagu2 banyak2 ni hehehhe..
lagu 1st:
muzik ok, riffing tipikal, sound biasa je la. music arrangement normal la. ko banyak explore kat drumming tu kan? hehehe.. nanti biler dah ok ko study kat cara mixing dan carik sound lagi sedap ok. lagu ni kat tengah tu agak best!
lagu 2nd:
intro best gak. style2 maiden gitu.. kali ni sound agak balance, drumming pun sedap. tapi kureng biler masuk twin pedal dia jadi tenggelam suma sound lain. solo cam biasa, buleh improve ... yang lain ok, cam biasa kat tengah mesti catchy... lagu ni ada potensi tau...
lagu 3rd:
best gak, feel sama cam lagu 1st dan 2nd. cuma kalu buleh sound gitar rthym tu touch up sikit kasi mid sikit biar jelas strumming tu dengar. dan lagu ni x balance biler masuk clean, lagi sound dia kureng... sorry la ye, harap ko ok,
harap buleh dengar lagu2 ni complete ngan vocal baru lebih impak hehehhehe..
all the best bro... |
thanx for ur komen encik undefined..
3 lagu ni lagu lama, tahun 2004 dulu lg, pastu aku peram..xde tambah2 idea dh..frust sbab dulu aku jln lagu2 ni dgn band tp line up xbleh blah plak..so, jwpn nya ialah simpan dlm otak je lah..
sebenarnya nk dgr feedback je.. kalau ada yg suruh teruskan style ni, aku jln je.. kalau byk yg kutuk, aku jln projek lain.. projek melodic ni bungkus je lah.. kalau ada yg berminat awal tahun dpn, gua nyanyi plak n rekod lain..
thanx.. _________________ THE SON OF NORTHERN DARKNESS IS BACK!!!!
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Erna |
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 1:39 am Post subject: |
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i feally think ur 3 songs are good bro..
i really like the 2nd song..
i just think u can improve the recording parts in future..
good luck to u.. |
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STONE |
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:26 am Post subject: |
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Erna wrote: | i feally think ur 3 songs are good bro..
i really like the 2nd song..
i just think u can improve the recording parts in future..
good luck to u.. |
thanx ERna..
next year i'll upload new song.. and of coz a better sound than this recording..with vocal!!! (projek tamak..main sorang2..)
and 1 song tribute to DIMEBAG DARRELL!!! just wait aaa... _________________ THE SON OF NORTHERN DARKNESS IS BACK!!!!
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Erna |
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:34 pm Post subject: |
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STONE wrote: | Erna wrote: | i feally think ur 3 songs are good bro..
i really like the 2nd song..
i just think u can improve the recording parts in future..
good luck to u.. |
thanx ERna..
next year i'll upload new song.. and of coz a better sound than this recording..with vocal!!! (projek tamak..main sorang2..)
and 1 song tribute to DIMEBAG DARRELL!!! just wait aaa... |
haha..tamak pun tamak laa..janji puas hati..
cool, dime is really a legend bro..respect!! |
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fReqZz |
Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:58 am Post subject: |
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can i gve my view?
i dont think i'll comment on the song because i dont see any real problem in that department. its great. good idea.
aku rasa, nak kena improve part bila kau solo je. riffing dah ok.
picking nak kena jaga. aku tau kau mmg kaki speed kan? so, better improve kan picking. so x sound slack. use a metronome.
overall IMHO, its good
ala mau pakai olang ka?
hahahaha... _________________
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STONE |
Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:49 pm Post subject: |
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fReqZz wrote: | can i gve my view?
i dont think i'll comment on the song because i dont see any real problem in that department. its great. good idea.
aku rasa, nak kena improve part bila kau solo je. riffing dah ok.
picking nak kena jaga. aku tau kau mmg kaki speed kan? so, better improve kan picking. so x sound slack. use a metronome.
overall IMHO, its good
ala mau pakai olang ka?
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solo?
aku ni asal nya nk jadi max cavalera.. memang xpandai solo.. (pengakuan ikhlas ni..hehe..) aku lebih utamakan rhytm dr solo.. aku bukan gitar hero..
speeding?
aku dulu layan cannibal corpse, suffocation, napalm dan jenis2 brutal+death+grincore..so gitar mmg setan.. tp 3 lagu aku byk terpengaruh dgn inflames, iron maiden & chilfren of bodom (padahal aku bukan reti solo bergulung2 pun...pengakuan ikhlas lagi ni..)
mau pakai olang?
lagu aku kosong.. cuma aku main mood je dlm lagu aku ni..(bukan lagu emo..emo aku xminat lgsg..) nak ke main lagu aku? hehehe..
guna metronom? ok aku mmg tgh try.. thanx u my friend..
xpe, aku tgh kumpul brg skit2 ni.. biasa la student.. tggu lagu2 baru pasni ok... _________________ THE SON OF NORTHERN DARKNESS IS BACK!!!!
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