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STONE
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:25 pm    Post subject: review 3 lagu aku.. Reply with quote



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aku ada upload 3 lagu..
lagu ni aku wat tahun 2004 dulu...

1. Song of Instrinsic
http://i-bands.net/audiovault/play.php?band_id=1463&song_id=9361&mode=song_hifi

2. The Chosen One
http://i-bands.net/audiovault/play.php?band_id=1463&song_id=9363&mode=song_hifi

3. Nightmare
http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/play.php?band_id=1463&song_id=9364&mode=song_lofi

Lagu ni aku rekod secara raw.. gitar guna banyak layer gak... Just nak wat guide..sila komen, kalau xsedap jgn marah..memang aku buat utk standard demo bukan album..


Vocal : takde vocal sebab aku xnyanyi lagi..(lirik dh 3 tahun siap)

Guitar : Stone - aku guna Jackson PS37 + zoom G2.1u (1st time guna masa aku rekod ni, xsempat nak explore sound..)

Bass : takde bass

Drum : aku guna fruity loop 4

Software : Guitar Track version 2 + Fruity loop 4 (tapi sample drum amik software lain)

Hardware : PC aku..
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:32 pm    Post subject: BLACK METAL totally guna fruity loops 6 Reply with quote



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aku sedia pasang telinga untuk di komen..
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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alo en stone,

ape citer? banyak peningkatan skrg ye.. buleh buat lagu2 banyak2 ni hehehhe..

lagu 1st:

muzik ok, riffing tipikal, sound biasa je la. music arrangement normal la. ko banyak explore kat drumming tu kan? hehehe.. nanti biler dah ok ko study kat cara mixing dan carik sound lagi sedap ok. lagu ni kat tengah tu agak best!

lagu 2nd:

intro best gak. style2 maiden gitu.. kali ni sound agak balance, drumming pun sedap. tapi kureng biler masuk twin pedal dia jadi tenggelam suma sound lain. solo cam biasa, buleh improve ... yang lain ok, cam biasa kat tengah mesti catchy... lagu ni ada potensi tau...

lagu 3rd:

best gak, feel sama cam lagu 1st dan 2nd. cuma kalu buleh sound gitar rthym tu touch up sikit kasi mid sikit biar jelas strumming tu dengar. dan lagu ni x balance biler masuk clean, lagi sound dia kureng... sorry la ye, harap ko ok,

harap buleh dengar lagu2 ni complete ngan vocal baru lebih impak hehehhehe..

all the best bro...
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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undefined wrote:
alo en stone,

ape citer? banyak peningkatan skrg ye.. buleh buat lagu2 banyak2 ni hehehhe..

lagu 1st:

muzik ok, riffing tipikal, sound biasa je la. music arrangement normal la. ko banyak explore kat drumming tu kan? hehehe.. nanti biler dah ok ko study kat cara mixing dan carik sound lagi sedap ok. lagu ni kat tengah tu agak best!

lagu 2nd:

intro best gak. style2 maiden gitu.. kali ni sound agak balance, drumming pun sedap. tapi kureng biler masuk twin pedal dia jadi tenggelam suma sound lain. solo cam biasa, buleh improve ... yang lain ok, cam biasa kat tengah mesti catchy... lagu ni ada potensi tau...

lagu 3rd:

best gak, feel sama cam lagu 1st dan 2nd. cuma kalu buleh sound gitar rthym tu touch up sikit kasi mid sikit biar jelas strumming tu dengar. dan lagu ni x balance biler masuk clean, lagi sound dia kureng... sorry la ye, harap ko ok,

harap buleh dengar lagu2 ni complete ngan vocal baru lebih impak hehehhehe..

all the best bro...


thanx for ur komen encik undefined..

3 lagu ni lagu lama, tahun 2004 dulu lg, pastu aku peram..xde tambah2 idea dh..frust sbab dulu aku jln lagu2 ni dgn band tp line up xbleh blah plak..so, jwpn nya ialah simpan dlm otak je lah..

sebenarnya nk dgr feedback je.. kalau ada yg suruh teruskan style ni, aku jln je.. kalau byk yg kutuk, aku jln projek lain.. projek melodic ni bungkus je lah.. kalau ada yg berminat awal tahun dpn, gua nyanyi plak n rekod lain..

thanx..
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Erna
PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 1:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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i feally think ur 3 songs are good bro..
i really like the 2nd song..
i just think u can improve the recording parts in future..
good luck to u.. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Erna wrote:
i feally think ur 3 songs are good bro..
i really like the 2nd song..
i just think u can improve the recording parts in future..
good luck to u.. Very Happy


thanx ERna..

next year i'll upload new song.. and of coz a better sound than this recording..with vocal!!! Twisted Evil (projek tamak..main sorang2..)

and 1 song tribute to DIMEBAG DARRELL!!! Twisted Evil just wait aaa... Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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STONE wrote:
Erna wrote:
i feally think ur 3 songs are good bro..
i really like the 2nd song..
i just think u can improve the recording parts in future..
good luck to u.. Very Happy


thanx ERna..

next year i'll upload new song.. and of coz a better sound than this recording..with vocal!!! Twisted Evil (projek tamak..main sorang2..)

and 1 song tribute to DIMEBAG DARRELL!!! Twisted Evil just wait aaa... Laughing


haha..tamak pun tamak laa..janji puas hati..

cool, dime is really a legend bro..respect!!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



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can i gve my view?

i dont think i'll comment on the song because i dont see any real problem in that department. its great. good idea.

aku rasa, nak kena improve part bila kau solo je. riffing dah ok.
picking nak kena jaga. aku tau kau mmg kaki speed kan? so, better improve kan picking. so x sound slack. use a metronome. Wink

overall IMHO, its good Very Happy

ala mau pakai olang ka?

hahahaha...
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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fReqZz wrote:
can i gve my view?

i dont think i'll comment on the song because i dont see any real problem in that department. its great. good idea.

aku rasa, nak kena improve part bila kau solo je. riffing dah ok.
picking nak kena jaga. aku tau kau mmg kaki speed kan? so, better improve kan picking. so x sound slack. use a metronome. Wink

overall IMHO, its good Very Happy

ala mau pakai olang ka?

hahahaha...


solo?
aku ni asal nya nk jadi max cavalera.. memang xpandai solo.. (pengakuan ikhlas ni..hehe..) Laughing aku lebih utamakan rhytm dr solo.. aku bukan gitar hero..

speeding?
aku dulu layan cannibal corpse, suffocation, napalm dan jenis2 brutal+death+grincore..so gitar mmg setan.. tp 3 lagu aku byk terpengaruh dgn inflames, iron maiden & chilfren of bodom (padahal aku bukan reti solo bergulung2 pun...pengakuan ikhlas lagi ni..) Laughing

mau pakai olang?
lagu aku kosong.. cuma aku main mood je dlm lagu aku ni..(bukan lagu emo..emo aku xminat lgsg..) nak ke main lagu aku? hehehe..

guna metronom? ok aku mmg tgh try.. thanx u my friend..
xpe, aku tgh kumpul brg skit2 ni.. biasa la student.. tggu lagu2 baru pasni ok... Twisted Evil
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