| Author |
Message
|
| hungry |
 Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:25 pm Post subject: july 5th patch issues |
 |
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
quency may help estimate the sequencing effect of a Bordetella live vaccine on the polymerase chain reaction. Two prob
perturbation in catalytic intermediates of D. Patient who complains of frequent respiratory illness. phisms of the scrapie-associated fibril protein
organisms, we need as comprehensive as ER Act to prevent incorrectly glycosylated proteins from adapter protein complex formation and
of humans and chimpanzees lead to funda- IGF-I and are thought to potentiate IGF ac- often associated with clinical and molecu
_________________
Den Good Fruit - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/360
The Rogenz - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/498
& http://www.myspace.com/therogenz
Last edited by hungry on Tue Sep 07, 2010 6:13 pm; edited 2 times in total |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
| GryMlock |
| Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 1:23 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Joined: 24 Nov 2003
Posts: 3699
Location: Agombak Ago go!
|
dude..it's not crappy at all. I kinda like this song very much. good melody and Nice vocals. It did made me went searching back for my cat steven's cassette  . Wish u can do a more proper recordings with this song. I bet it'll get a pretty good air time on the radio. 
_________________
[ Kluk Kluk Adventure ] | [ Call the Paramedics ] | [ Dot ] | [ AJEEPEK ] |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| pali |
| Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 9:44 am Post subject: |
|
|
Joined: 03 Jul 2004
Posts: 687
|
agree with GryMlock there. this song definetly is a radio-friendly song.
nice melody and vox - but if you could put in some percussion it will be much more better i think. but then again, i think it's better the way it is. nice solo work too. bottom line-i like this song.
_________________
"life is what you make it"
Pali'sProject
TERUBOZU*on drums |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| hungry |
| Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 9:26 am Post subject: thks guys |
|
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| hungry |
| Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 9:27 am Post subject: thks guys |
|
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
thks ajeep n pali for ur comments..
yup. we must improve the audio quality...radio time sounds sweet but must get a better quality recording on this number , and theres more to do to make it a ketat-song...hehe..
guys....when we're gonna re-record it , gonna use a good acoustic bass , and some percussion though not sure what would sound good..a bongo? drums with brush sticks? what do u think grymlock?pali?
thanks guys..
_________________
Den Good Fruit - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/360
The Rogenz - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/498
& http://www.myspace.com/therogenz |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| Bode |
| Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 12:20 am Post subject: |
|
|
Joined: 03 Feb 2004
Posts: 2033
|
Hungry requested me to review this song, so here it is!
First of all let me congratulate you on having written a great song!
Even with only one vocal part and probably 2 acoustic guitar parts, and with the less than desirable recording quality,the song comes alive! Vocals are good and a strong reason why the song stands strong despite this being a demo recording. One minor gripe is the electric guitar single note swells at the intro and certain parts of the song is not in tune with the acoustic.
Of course, I'm not going to comment on the recording quality because you guys yourself are not happy with it, so, that is just a matter of getting the opportunity to record the song in a better recording environment and facilities next time.
I have to say that I love the acoustic guitar soloing here. Good choice of notes, phrasing and sense of melody and direction, and the solo complements the song very well. Good job!
Another gripe is that the song is probably a wee bit too long...for a song in this genre. Cleverly chopping off another 40 seconds (delete one round of verse for instance) will make it long enough to be enjoyed thoroughly, but at the same time make listeners wanting for more. This is only relevant if you want this song to be radio friendly, but if you're going for one of those 30 minute epic songs ala Dream Theater/Yes, than ignore that advice
I'm sorry that I have nothing much else to say, simply because this is a good effort and you guys should be proud of writing this piece. All in all, I'm impressed. More music from you guys please! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| pali |
| Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 8:57 am Post subject: Re: thks guys |
|
|
Joined: 03 Jul 2004
Posts: 687
|
| hungry wrote: | thks ajeep n pali for ur comments..
yup. we must improve the audio quality...radio time sounds sweet but must get a better quality recording on this number , and theres more to do to make it a ketat-song...hehe..
guys....when we're gonna re-record it , gonna use a good acoustic bass , and some percussion though not sure what would sound good..a bongo? drums with brush sticks? what do u think grymlock?pali?
thanks guys.. |
i suggest u use a conga. if you're not sure what a conga is, here's the pic
 . really cool sound to it.
_________________
"life is what you make it"
Pali'sProject
TERUBOZU*on drums |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| deadzid |
| Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 2:09 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Mod Squad
Joined: 13 Feb 2004
Posts: 3891
Location: Shah Alam
|
nice tune... the sound quality ain't that bad, it's still listenable. you've got cool voice there, great sense of melody for this song / genre... i like it!
simple yet sensible line of acoustic solos... hope you can record this song in electric version (a profesional one - not that jamm session!). Good work!
_________________
> facebook
> youtube
> my-mic
> mockspecial.com |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| okta |
| Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 4:39 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Mod Squad
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Posts: 1139
Location: Taiping
|
Hey,
Memang radio friendly lagu hangpa. 
do u guys have a proper band?
Drummer?bass?
maybe i can help u out. Doing a proper recording.
PM me if interested. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| hungry |
| Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 11:53 am Post subject: Re: thks guys |
|
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| hungry |
| Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 12:44 pm Post subject: thkss!!! |
|
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
| Bode wrote: | Hungry requested me to review this song, so here it is!
First of all let me congratulate you on having written a great song!
Even with only one vocal part and probably 2 acoustic guitar parts, and with the less than desirable recording quality,the song comes alive! Vocals are good and a strong reason why the song stands strong despite this being a demo recording. One minor gripe is the electric guitar single note swells at the intro and certain parts of the song is not in tune with the acoustic.
Of course, I'm not going to comment on the recording quality because you guys yourself are not happy with it, so, that is just a matter of getting the opportunity to record the song in a better recording environment and facilities next time.
I have to say that I love the acoustic guitar soloing here. Good choice of notes, phrasing and sense of melody and direction, and the solo complements the song very well. Good job!
Another gripe is that the song is probably a wee bit too long...for a song in this genre. Cleverly chopping off another 40 seconds (delete one round of verse for instance) will make it long enough to be enjoyed thoroughly, but at the same time make listeners wanting for more. This is only relevant if you want this song to be radio friendly, but if you're going for one of those 30 minute epic songs ala Dream Theater/Yes, than ignore that advice
I'm sorry that I have nothing much else to say, simply because this is a good effort and you guys should be proud of writing this piece. All in all, I'm impressed. More music from you guys please! |
brudder bode...thks so much fer ur comment. means a lot to us 2 get ur comment bro. thks!
i guess its the same cry for me = better output quality... well, we're waiting fer that opportunity to do a better job! hehe..
gripes noted! will take action! will get into action with the gang to make it better...better better betterrrrrr bettttteeeerrrrrrrrr.......
thks bang bode.
_________________
Den Good Fruit - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/360
The Rogenz - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/498
& http://www.myspace.com/therogenz |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| hungry |
| Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 12:55 pm Post subject: zid!!! |
|
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
| deadzid wrote: | nice tune... the sound quality ain't that bad, it's still listenable. you've got cool voice there, great sense of melody for this song / genre... i like it!
simple yet sensible line of acoustic solos... hope you can record this song in electric version (a profesional one - not that jamm session!). Good work! |
deadzid! thks man fer ur review...
will record proper professional one (acoustic and electric)... one dat is not a jam version..heheh...actually tak nak letak that jam version, tapi tangan gatal masa tu...(dah deleted dah that version..n will upload a pro-recording version)...now got so much of space...tapi takde good quality nyer lagu. hehe 
might gig this september...kalau kiter gig..line up lagu would be
1.crazy mister entrepreneur
2.tasty miss sunlight
3. the starfish song
4. hey now
and maybe lagu "i am wrong" and one cover from queens of the stone age...
once again, thks zid!!!..comment byk byk yer..lagu lagu yang lain tu , walalupun jam version je..ekekekekekek..)
_________________
Den Good Fruit - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/360
The Rogenz - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/498
& http://www.myspace.com/therogenz |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
| hungry |
| Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 1:01 pm Post subject: okta! |
|
|
Joined: 27 May 2004
Posts: 123
Location: Klang
|
| okta wrote: | Hey,
Memang radio friendly lagu hangpa.
do u guys have a proper band?
Drummer?bass?
maybe i can help u out. Doing a proper recording.
PM me if interested. |
hey man...how r u...
lagu radio friendly..yay! u guys think so? ok ler tu..ehehe...but manelah nak dapat quality cam matrice! matrice rocks man.
drummer n bassist ader..cume hari tu die org takde..plus kiter cube cube je record one-go ... actually , at that time , i just got a new pc..takde software watsoever except for that soundblaster wave editor..so..kiter like budak budak kecik record one go ..letak mic kat tgh , 2 guitars and vox around it. but in any given time , would record a proper version....
thks man...
_________________
Den Good Fruit - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/360
The Rogenz - http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/498
& http://www.myspace.com/therogenz |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
