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| fReqZz |
 Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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| aB wrote: | | fReqZz wrote: | hey bro aB and Doc.. mind doing some review?
comment as u will.. and bombard me with anything.. 
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Bro, satu benda yang aku nak bombard adalah... title dia membuatkan aku anticipate a deathmetal shred fest 
(1) thumbs up : what i hear is a soothing melody with nice guitar tone, sustain pun sedap. i can hear the different phrasing - verse, chorus etc. ada 'cerita'.. best.
(2) boleh improve : the ending note after each phrasing, the vibrato ada pitching lari sikit. satu lagi, mungkin ada sebab musabab kenapa tak ada hi-hats/cymbals and bass ... cuba masuk kan sikit towards the middle/end of the song bagi "hidup" & colorful lagi lagu ni. Climax for the 'tapping' part akan lebih menyerlah.  if not, kalau panjang lagi lagu ni takut sound monotonous.
overall IMHO, nice work. short & simple melody, good tone, feel-good vibe
p/s lagu ni fade out, ada lagi ke? |
haha..
spasm ialah:
spasm n. 1 sudden involuntary muscular contraction. 2 convulsive movement or emotion etc. 3 (usu. foll. by of) colloq. brief spell. [Greek spasma from spao pull]
nak cr title lagu.. i've open the dictionary, nak taruk title pun susah zaman skang ni.. kot2 salah.. tp still org misunderstood lg.. .. emotion je yg ade contraction.. 
about the tapping part.. i cant play fast.. that is the best i can come up with... lagu ni sekejap je bro.. xder idea nak shred ape lg..
thanx bro.. i'll sure take it as an important note..
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| afiqme |
| Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:05 pm Post subject: |
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aku dgr dah ... sedap jugak melody ko erk.. tapi aku rase mase part muting skit tuh ade pitch prob skt ... pastu tempo tapping mcm lari skit laaa.. n last thing guitar ko plain sgt .. maksud aku takde accent n' feel ... tapi melody mmg respek .. susah woo nak wat lagu melody slow2 nih..
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| fReqZz |
| Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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thanx.. accent n feel tu susah nak archive.. mmg susah pun.. palm ngan tap heh? orait bro!
lagu slow mmg pyh wo.. tp nak men laju x reti.. hehe.. sbb tu lagu ni penderk je..
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| afiqme |
| Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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| fReqZz wrote: | | thanx.. accent n feel tu susah nak archive.. mmg susah pun.. palm ngan tap heh? orait bro! |
accent tuh ko kuatkan first note dlm beat ko tuh ... ko pick harder ... pastuh kalau ko nak vibrato ko mantap & bulat ko hit the note harder... sampai jari yg tekan note tu bergaris pun takpe... ni slalu aku buat la kalu taknak guitar aku nampak plain.. hehe
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| fReqZz |
| Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 4:13 pm Post subject: |
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yg tuuu.. mmg plain la.. aku x reti nak variate kan lagi selain palm.. aku dgr andy timmons punyer variate.. perghhh... stim..
any more tips x?
aku mmg perlu dalam bab2 mem"variate" kan note ni...
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:15 pm Post subject: |
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sorry aku tak perasan la ko post lagu..
WOW!! aku tak sangka ko jenis guitarist yg agak teliti, sopan dan tak gopoh(aku gopoh sikit sebab kena penyakit malmsteen huhu)..
1. kebanyakan vibrato ikut tempo which is very very good!
2. bending pun bagus..note sampai dan tak sakit gigi!
3. Picking boleh dikatakan dah ada confidence
cuma ada beberapa part tu boleh dibaiki lagi. Secara basicnya dah byk teknik yg ko boleh buat.. sekarang ni aku sarankan ko tumpukan pada tone jari/note maturity..
Kuatkan jari dgn dua aspek ni
1. masa grip neck (kekuatan semua jari + pergelangan)
2. masa tekan note. (kekuatan satu jari)
3. Pelbagai lagi vibrato untuk sesuatu tempo.. (4, 8, 16)
ko record guna apa ni? sedap jugak tone guitar dia...
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| fReqZz |
| Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:30 pm Post subject: |
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allo bro.. mekasih sudi komen..
aku bukan teliti sgt.. tp x reti fast2 lick ni.. aku pk ibanez rg plug ke zoom 505... pastu aku x der tweak2 bunyik dier dlm software sbb x reti.. so ape yg kluar dr zoom tu tros masuk ke s/card..
aku tgh berusaha kuatkan lg jari ni.. maklumlah, ko tgk je la aku.. mcm bdk umo 14 thn.. hehe
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 8:50 pm Post subject: |
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bila thred ni nak hidup balik daa.. kalau aku ada pc kan best..boleh rekod
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| neskopi |
| Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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askum bro izzi
nak tanye sket a
sound sdp btol ler.. nak2 tym lagu "what a wonderful world" versi instrumental tu.. memukau btol
citer sket gear bro, bley?
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| fReqZz |
| Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:02 am Post subject: |
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wah.. baru aku perasan.
last review adalah lagu aku. haha..
bro izzi pakai digitech gnx3000 x silap aku.
ngan fender kepala tebalik besar.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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ye la tak.. kat sign. bro izzi ade gambo gnx dgn tube ultragain tu..
tp ak nak lg detail ler.. gtr model ape? pikap ape? heheh
pastu amp ape.. sdp tol bunyi die |
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