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stan
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:39 am    Post subject: ORG!L: Terlena (instrumental) Reply with quote



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please give feedback about my art.... peace! ^_^ V Very Happy
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 10:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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song link? that would make it easier for us to review..thanks! Smile
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stan
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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http://www.i-bands.net/audiovault/bands/2761/

tq kerana luangkan masa bagi feedback.... long live music. peace! ^_^ V
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MiN
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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hi stan,

how long have you been playing?

i think your guitar needs tuning coz its a bit flat but overall nice try dude...
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Ridzi
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



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Recording quality aside. I feel the chord progression is one of those 'overused' ones. try exploring the infinite other possibilities.

you need to tune your guitar properly.

you need to practice your rhythm against a metronome. Rhythm doesn't have to played accurately like an atomic clock - but the kinks in this recording show your inexperience.

But i also get the felling this was done on-the-fly...meaning you didn't actually write the song it was just a jam thing. If you take some time to plan and prepare what you going to play then you will have some sort of idea where you are going. What i am saying is there seems to be no direction.

I apologise if i have hurt your feelings in any way and they are all in good spirit Smile

Nonetheless not entirely a bad first try. Just need to brush-up on the things i mentioned above.

Practice - Practice - Practice.

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stan
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 6:56 pm    Post subject: Thanks... Reply with quote



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I agree that i create this song without prepared very well. the process are: I recorded my rhythm only one shot, then i mixed it with lead using other guitar. then i save it. Anyway thanks 4 feedback.maybe, i will release a fully song on april (genre metal rock). ^_^ V
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IZZI
PostPosted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 4:20 pm    Post subject: Re: Thanks... Reply with quote



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stan wrote:
I agree that i create this song without prepared very well. the process are: I recorded my rhythm only one shot, then i mixed it with lead using other guitar. then i save it. Anyway thanks 4 feedback.maybe, i will release a fully song on april (genre metal rock). ^_^ V


Hi bro..

We're looking forward to listen the improvement. Please keep it up bro!

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stan
PostPosted: Sat May 06, 2006 2:04 pm    Post subject: time fly.... Reply with quote



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i just wanna say i postpone my project coz so busy... peace!! (still terlena)
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