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| stan |
 Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:39 am Post subject: ORG!L: Terlena (instrumental) |
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please give feedback about my art.... peace! ^_^ V  |
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| omarjamaludin |
| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 10:48 am Post subject: |
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| stan |
| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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| MiN |
| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:50 pm Post subject: |
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hi stan,
how long have you been playing?
i think your guitar needs tuning coz its a bit flat but overall nice try dude...
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| Ridzi |
| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:51 pm Post subject: |
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Recording quality aside. I feel the chord progression is one of those 'overused' ones. try exploring the infinite other possibilities.
you need to tune your guitar properly.
you need to practice your rhythm against a metronome. Rhythm doesn't have to played accurately like an atomic clock - but the kinks in this recording show your inexperience.
But i also get the felling this was done on-the-fly...meaning you didn't actually write the song it was just a jam thing. If you take some time to plan and prepare what you going to play then you will have some sort of idea where you are going. What i am saying is there seems to be no direction.
I apologise if i have hurt your feelings in any way and they are all in good spirit 
Nonetheless not entirely a bad first try. Just need to brush-up on the things i mentioned above.
Practice - Practice - Practice.
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| stan |
| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 6:56 pm Post subject: Thanks... |
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| I agree that i create this song without prepared very well. the process are: I recorded my rhythm only one shot, then i mixed it with lead using other guitar. then i save it. Anyway thanks 4 feedback.maybe, i will release a fully song on april (genre metal rock). ^_^ V |
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| IZZI |
| Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 4:20 pm Post subject: Re: Thanks... |
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| stan wrote: | | I agree that i create this song without prepared very well. the process are: I recorded my rhythm only one shot, then i mixed it with lead using other guitar. then i save it. Anyway thanks 4 feedback.maybe, i will release a fully song on april (genre metal rock). ^_^ V |
Hi bro..
We're looking forward to listen the improvement. Please keep it up bro!
Welcome to i-bands..
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| stan |
| Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 2:04 pm Post subject: time fly.... |
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| i just wanna say i postpone my project coz so busy... peace!! (still terlena) |
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